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1st Building, Italian Apartment house.
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Posted: Monday, July 31, 2006 - 01:56 AM UTC
looks nice, i like the way you made the roof and the curtain (don't know if it's written the right way) that hangs out of the window.

Maybe make the white plaster a bit darker, more dirty.

Good job
Thomas
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Posted: Monday, July 31, 2006 - 02:10 AM UTC
A good start Bob! Although I have some small pointers, try to make the plaster look more cracked around the damaged sections. Now it looks more like it is, what to say, sanded of instead of fallen of the wall. And also, is it just me or do the roof tiles look a bit oversized? Might be just funny angels though.


BTW what have you maid the fence on the balcony of? It looks very good.
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Posted: Monday, July 31, 2006 - 06:59 AM UTC
Looks great! Really like the roof and broken gutters. Also love the drapes coming through the window.

On that note the plaster looks a little uneven in places and their seems to be air bubbles on the left side. One more nitpick is that the broken bricks at the top are all whole bricks. When brick walls get shot up the ends usually break up unevenly into halfbricks and small pieces, smash 'em up more!

Shermie looks good too.

P.S.- Are you building a Battle of Cecina dio?
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Posted: Tuesday, August 01, 2006 - 06:50 PM UTC
Nice Job, I like very much
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Posted: Tuesday, August 01, 2006 - 07:08 PM UTC

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I cheated on the railing, it was wrought iron fence, I just cut off the top points.


IMHO there is nothing called cheating Bob, if it looks good it's right!
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